Ooh, super awesome monster design! I did not know what to expect of Del from the first page, which is probably what you wanted readers to think!
I also love how you use the streakiness inherent in markers as part of a distinct style. That turns something that's one of the harder parts of making marker work look good into a really atmospheric way of shading, and it's fantastic.
Wow, this comic is so beautiful! The colouring is so atmospheric.
I am deeply impressed by your ability to draw Del in this pose and at this angle and make his (?) anatomy kinda work. I mean his anatomy is rather impossible, but still somehow believable. I love his design. Especially the stripey arms, and the skull-face that's not totally creepy. He looks like a really sweet guy. monster. whatever.